Looking for the Truth...is that a good name?

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Looking for the Truth...is that a good name?

Starith
Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA

0 posted 1999-09-05 09:18 PM

When you look at me,
An odd person you shall see.

For I am not like most you know,
Though I'm not much different from head
to toe.

The difference lies with in,
Hides behind my grin.

To know the truth you must know where it
lies,
Therefore you must look beyond my eyes.

The passage to the soul through the eyes,
That is where the truth lies.

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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-05 11:11 PM

How about 'Can You See?' or 'Where Truth Lies'?

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Denise

Starith
Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA

2 posted 1999-09-05 11:13 PM

Thanks for the suggestions..I wasn't so sure about the name...I can write 'em fairly well (or so I think) but I really can't get with the name thing.

Starith

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Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 1999-09-06 01:32 AM

I love it!! It talked to me quite well!!
Thanks!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

4 posted 1999-09-06 01:51 AM

I think I'd go for 'where the truth lies' too...well done..

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The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-09-06 09:23 AM

Starith,
Enjoyed the read, well done.

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