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Trynete
Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 1999-09-05 10:42 PM


We will forever now be enemies,
when I think of what you did to me.
How could someone, be so mean?,
even for you I thought it was pretty low,
but I guess I didn't really ever know you.
How could you have been so cold?
Then when I finally went & told,
he didn't believe me.
He said you swore on her grave,
now I'm living in hell for this eternity.
You took something so
precious & valuable from me,
come to find out just what
it was the next morning.
I want it back,
but too bad it just doesn't
work like that.
You should have been truthful
from the very start,
now I stand here looking
down upon my shattered heart.
Why me?
What did I ever do for you
to do such a thing?
Now I see who you really are,
& from who I thought you were,
I see is quite far.
Then when I told you I might
be having your baby,
you threatened me.
How could anyone
be so mean?
That's kind of ironic,
because I use to feel protected
in your presence, & by you.
Isn't funny just how
quickly people change,
or show the true colors rather?
Especially in a blink of an eye,
I now realized, you wanted one thing,
from me,
& now that you've attained it,
I hope you're satisfied.


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Trinity

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Starith
Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA
1 posted 1999-09-05 10:46 PM


Good poem...the pain shines through and the message bites even through a computer screen...I'm just glad you're not talking about me...

Welcome to the forums...I hope to see more of your work...

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-09-05 10:53 PM


Oh my! Some deep and hurt feelings here! Thank you for sharing this. I am sorry you had to endure this! But one thing is you can be thankful those colors came out! I hope you find someone who treats you right!
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 1999-09-05 11:59 PM


Backlash from a broken heart...a lot of feelings I got from you. Sorry, to hear of your sadness, but thank you for sharing!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

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