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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Imortal words I do not write Lost to the ages, gone from sight Overlooked by the pass of time Verses are lost, its not a crime Every one has a poets heart All people can master the art But so few do we remember Rarer than is true loves ember All these words that from my pen flow Shall all my hearts emotions show Eternity will not recall Every word that from my lips fall Later years wont remember me In all the word I write for thee Gifts for you from within my heart |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very Very beautiful, my friend. It's true that your words may not be remembered, but if they touched someone, then the effort was well worth it. Exellent work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem! There is more to this than meets the eye at first glance...a wonderful tribute to your love!  |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thank you both for you kind compliments.  |
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Former Football New Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 8Wyoming, MN, USA |
words may be overlooked and lost, but meanings stay true forever.... Remeber that, der keit Foot ------------------ the true sign of a thinker is not the sound, but the silence. |
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Former Football New Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 8Wyoming, MN, USA |
words may be overlooked and lost, but meanings stay true forever.... Remeber that, der keit Foot ------------------ the true sign of a thinker is not the sound, but the silence. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful!! What more can one ask for than true words from the heart, their gift is more precious than gold ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
just thought I would put this back at the top to see if anyone else had anything to say. |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Der, Always remember this...your words maybe lost...but the inspirations they give are remembered forever. Starith ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! [This message has been edited by Starith (edited 09-05-99).] |
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