Open Poetry #2 |
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Lilies In Winter |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
and make a lace covering for the earth, protecting a magic garden where love was once in winter bloom… a rare and beautiful sight. Exquisite lilies rose from a Christmas snow that was never cold; their aroma was your breath on my cheek as we danced to a song written for us. Spring came and I could feel the flowers beginning to die even as the earth warmed below them. One last scent arose just as you whispered goodbye, bringing the summer sun's thick heat to burn. It blinded my mind when you left… The small tender lilies begin to emerge again as you return to impart the sweet fragrance of your words into the air, but I will wait until winter to inhale it, for when you turned the seasons back I couldn't believe in magic anymore. caroline 1999 all rights reserved ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful caroline. You painted such a lovely picture with your words. I could feel the emotion! Very well done! ) ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All right - I admit it - I like everything you write.... Everything!!.. ![]() |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you kindly, ladies ![]() ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Tyke Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26Calgary, Alberta, Canada |
Very well done! look forward to more. Samuel Johnson said 'the joy of life is variety; the tenderest love requires to be renewed by intervals of absence.' If only absence wasn't so damn long! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
caroline, Touching what more cane I say. *L* |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
and thank you kindly too, gentlemen ![]() |
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