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Looking for Someone to Give Love to
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Looking for Someone to Give Love to |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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( in a songwriting mood tonight) I am tired and I am through With looking for someone to give love to. Times like this, I feel so blue Looking for someone to give love to. Though it could be I'm to blame All my dreams turn out the same Nothing more than ballyhoo Looking for someone to give love to. At times out there, it's like a zoo Looking for someone to give love to. What's a kindred soul to do? Looking for someone to give love to. Tired of dodging all that flak Take my love and give some back! Ain't there anybody who Is looking for someone to give love to? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
There's always a heart looking to be loved ...it's finding the one open enough to receive it that's the trick! HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems like Ron's next job is to add sound, and you may then add the tempo. Good work, as always. |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
I sure wish I could here you sing this? It's great. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Take my word for it, Kelly. You don't. I sound like the Budweiser frogs! |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Bud wise ur This is a definite number 1 hit! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Balladeer to love you is something I think one would fear for if I cared and you let me go where would all I feel go? To love is sheer magic to feel to express such emotion is beyond compare to be as two but then as one leaves a heart in such despair but one has to admit such a love is so very rare.... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Although you say you can not sing Such melodies with words you bring Oh Balladeer, just know one thing No tune could ever be as grand... Grand as the gems writ by your hand!  ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You know I'll always sing with you, Deer...  ......Rib-bit......Rib-bit[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-05-99).] |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Balladeer, You have done it again...how and where do you come up with these things? You may sing like the budwiser frogs..but your words flow beautifully. Starith ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Raspberme Junior Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 21South Hill, WA, USA |
pretty awesome! u know how u feel, even i may be a little young. hey, that ryhmed! ------------------ Raspberme |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW!! What comments!!! Rainbow...there are no answers to your words Denise...any praise from you makes me glow Nan......Your lithium perscription needs to be refilled. You are AWESOME! Starith...I thank you Raspberme...you got a great future! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, I think it would be fun to ride the tail of this comet. So I'll add my well done. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How can I post to this one It's as if you read my mind I spend my days in searching But it's never love I find I have so much to give I don't know what to do So I spend my life looking for someone to give love to I know that out there somewhere Waits my own soul mate I only hope I find him Before it is too late Well written Balladeer!!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well Balladeer, we find ourselves sailing in the same boat! Another masterpiece! LOL...I liked those Bud-Wise-Er Frogs! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What is a song but poetry without the music? This is such a lonely song, Balladeer - and of course it's your wonderful talent showing through here!  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Balladeer I think I would also like to hear that to music. When one does find such love you speak of. That person is in awe of the beauty they now see. Nothing more they would rather have than to be happy as can be. This is the second writing I've read of yours!!! Well, Done!!!!  ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
As always...AWESOME Sir... ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
If you mean your voice is rough or raspy, well then, I'll love it. Besides I like the Budweiser frogs. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
What a beautiful ballad! Seems I'm not alone in my own frustration!------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
All I can say is you're awesome, Balladeer. Michael |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer dear heart did you ever get anyone to supply the music, because I know where I can find a Melody just waiting to go along with this. Fabulous work 'Deer, utterly fabulous and anothe goes into the 'Deer hall love and warm stuff Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwwww...crying: |
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