Open Poetry #2 |
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Wings of the Angels |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Dad He taught me how to throw a ball, ...to stand up for what's right, Upon the wings of angels, ...he journeys to the light. He took my hand to lead the way, ...was comfort when I fell, He is the rock of my foundation, ...I bid my last farewell. Taught me values, how to live, ...as moral as a preacher, With misted eyes, I say farewell, ...to one who is my teacher. He taught me to be courteous, ...that if I try I can, He taught me how to love; to cry, ...and how to be a man. Deep within a searing pain, ...for life too soon did end, As journeys home, I bid adieu, ...to father, my best friend. Mom A gentle wind blew cross the land, Reaching out to take a hand, For on the winds the angels came, Calling out a mother's name. Left behind, the children's tears, Loving memories of the years, Of joy and love, a life well spent, And now to God, a mother's sent. With saddened heart, a child's farewell, Regrets of love, forgot to tell, Mother's whispers from above, "Twas not words that showed your love." As flesh departs, deep sorrow's pain, But mother's love, shall e'er remain, Inside each child, a mother lives, For of herself, a mother gives. On angel's wings, a heavenly flight, The journey home, towards the light, To those who weep, a life is gone, But in God's love, 'tis but the dawn. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
This is so true for me, it is beautiful. When I read it I couldn't help thinking, with sadness, about all the people who didn't have parents like that. I can't imagine how bad life would have been without them. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tim, this is such an absolute tribute to your parents. What a blessing to have such wonderful ones. I did also. And it seems no matter how long we had them, it's never long enough, you are never prepared for them to leave. My mother died when I was young, My dad when I was much older. Both deaths were just as painful. Very lovely poems. They brought tears to my eyes. ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tim, this posting is absolutely beautiful. Such a fine tribute to two who made an imense inpact in your life. From what I have seen here, your parents did a wonderful job in raising you, I'm sure they would be proud. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tim! I have to get more kleenex! Wonderful poetic tribute to your parents. It shows what wonderful parents they were - to have raised a man like you. ![]() |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent thoughts and sentiments, Tim. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This saddens me! I am sorry for your loss! I couldn't imagine both of them leaving! You have done a beautiful tribute here, such loving words. God Bless You!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
deeply moving...beautifully written ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Beautiful...(wiping the tears from my eyes)...it is always hard to say good bye...we take so much for granted...most of us realize that too late. Bravo! ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, yes, yes! I applaud your wonderful creation! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
A moving tribute ... may the Lord bless and keep them. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Capulet[R+J] Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 41Calgary,Alberta Canada |
Tim, this took my breath away. ------------------ Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds.. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
What a beautiful tribute! I can imagine the tears, as you were writing this with joyful memory. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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