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Hearbreaker (repost)

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-05 10:42 AM

I lay next to her just watching her cry.
Heartbroken tears are trailing down her face.
I told her, "I love you", was just a lie.
The streaming tears really picked up their pace.

She's not the first nor will she be the last.
Emotional rape is my favorite game.
I recall the broken hearts of the past.
All of them cry out their heart, just the same.

With tears still flowing, I stand up to leave.
"Don't leave me", she cries, "Could I have done more?"
Their begging is the goal that I achieve.
That crumpled face is something I adore.

In the back of my mind there is one doubt.
What happens if my game should turn about?

©1999 DreamEvil

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

1 posted 1999-09-05 11:06 AM

ACCCCCKKKKKK
oh this was sad, and I wonder if I too am one of those night creatures that break hearts for a living....
I.Skye

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Every man has in himself a continent of undiscovered character. Happy is he who acts Columbus to his own soul.......J. Stevens

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-09-05 11:16 AM

I know there are men out there like this (women too).....this is a very sad poem... I feel bad for the 'heartbreaker'....

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-05 01:39 PM

True, there are men out there like this. Thank God they are in the minority! Very good poem!

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Denise

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-09-05 01:46 PM

Good poem Dream
"Emotional rape" in itself.

Michael

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-09-05 05:00 PM

Well written Dream, but eventually the games run out and left alone is the player...my sympathy is with him as he never realizes until too late what he had from the very start

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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