questions, i guess that im to affriad to ask????????

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questions, i guess that im to affriad to ask????????

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-09-04 07:22 PM

does your future,
dwell softly in my eyes,
an unconditonal love,
without comprimise?

could you spend every morning,
in only my embrace,
feeling my kisses,
brush lightly across your face?

will all the confusion,
wear you down over time,
or is it true that forever,
youll be only mine?

can i take for granted,
all the insecurities i have,
trusting you, and loving you,
is all ive ever had.

is it possible to know,
that in me lies happiness,
without a doubt in your soul,
or a second guess in your kiss?

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-04 07:40 PM

This is quite lovely amber. I very much enjoyed this!

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Denise

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

2 posted 1999-09-04 07:44 PM

thank you very much, i havent been exactly flowing to much on the happy note lately, so im glad you enjoyed this poem. wish i felt more like this at the moment.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

3 posted 1999-09-04 07:49 PM

I enjoyed it too. Questions we all ask, i believe. you put them into words nicely.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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