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Power of your eyes
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Power of your eyes |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
I could never forget the power of your eyes piercing right through what i felt was untrue the same old wind blows this way again and your hair glistens with anticipation no matter what way im facing your eyes are all i see staring through me then we are one indefinitely... ------------------ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...you post far too little for my satisfaction. This was a wonderfully written piece full of imagery and emotion. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I agree with hoot owl. But, you caught me again! bravo ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
One, two, I make three!!!  Deep!!! Justbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Wow...truly amazing piece...Bravo. ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
great piece!!! waiting to read more from you. |
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Tyke Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26Calgary, Alberta, Canada |
powerful thoughts very nicely put. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the windows to the soul |
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