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IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 253


0 posted 1999-09-04 02:43 PM








In the top of the house

tucked away

among dust, cobwebs, and memories

I met you

for the first time

although I have always known you

in many ways




locked away in a box

sealed in a paper tomb

there you have slept for almost 40 years

forgotten

but not really




I touched you for the first time today

all soft curls and tangles

I felt you, in a lock of your hair

Great-Grandmother

have you waited all this time

to meet me too?











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God is really only another artist. He invented the giraffe, the elephant and the cat. He has no real style, He just goes on trying other things.
- Pablo Picasso

© Copyright 1999 IsabelleSkye - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
1 posted 1999-09-04 03:46 PM


I like it.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-04 04:09 PM


Very wonderfully written. This makes for an enjoyable read.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Tim
Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

3 posted 1999-09-04 06:18 PM


She does not grace enough with her listed occupations.
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-09-04 10:38 PM


Isabelle,
An unuasual rendition I enjoyed.

Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
5 posted 1999-09-05 08:32 PM


Awesome Izzy..... You met an angel today...
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