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The Nightmare
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The Nightmare |
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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
I dreamt again last night, Of wild and angry seas, Of storms and all their might, That forced me to my knees. Beloved cliffs no more, A gloomy place of death, With poisoned air and gore, To trap me by my breath. But for my love of light, My heart ablaze with pain, Braved yet another fight, Which never seems in vain. Yet smashed down on the floor My face is wet with tears, I've lost another war, Too many through the years. I dreamt again last night, Of wild and angry seas, Of storms and all their might, That forced me to my knees. Angel |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Angel this poem was very well written...the use of symbolism in it worked very well. Nicely done! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Angel, good job here. I like the way it flows, and I agree with hoot...good symbolism. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
TY Hoot and Caroline! I am new to the poetry writing world so your words are a great encouragement. You made my day  Angel |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Angel, I loved this. It was truly a pleasure to read! ------------------ Denise |
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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
Ty Dsnyder! Glad you like it. Angel |
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