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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-09-29 09:22 PM


Woke up today
mind flashing "ERROR"
heart skipping beats
soul filled with terror

What made this happen?
what could it be?
something inside me
I could'nt see

Blind in the darkness
Please show me through
I'm trying my hardest
just give me a clue

When clouds finally part
warmth touches my soul
sun shining brightly
ridding the cold

Everyone wakes sometimes
feeling like this
but bad always passes
and good comes with a kiss ;*

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-29 09:30 PM


Very nice!

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Denise

RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985
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2 posted 2002-02-13 03:33 PM


something positive always comes from something negative! I enjoyed this

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-01-01 04:11 AM


*smiling* like it
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