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Moon Rising |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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I never saw it quite that way before, saffron cheeks just resting for a moment on the hill, an old Jack-O-Lantern sagging into November, dots of trees silhouetted like a day's growth on an upper lip. It tickled me to see such majesty turned comic, and I had to write this poem for the smile in me. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Sad for the Jack 'O' Lantern but this was a cute poem nonetheless. They do kinda sag into November don't they? ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The imagery in this one is great ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Martie hon - I love this...one of your early works...nice to look back..  KAll obscurity starts with a danger: |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ This gave me a much needed smile~  Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Martie, this is just right for this time of year, and you made me  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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