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Roger Leewright
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since 1999-09-25
Posts 28
Beaverton, OR.USA

0 posted 1999-09-29 01:28 PM


Eyes of a friend

I see your eyes as you try to hide them,
Knowing the feelings that burns inside.
Sensing the desire from across the room,
Knowing your afraid to face the truth.

You think you are alone in this,
As you sneak your clever peek.
I brave the chance to talk to you,
A kiss I really would like to sneak.

I act so confident in front of you,
You seem so captured by my way,
Could you possibly feel the way I do?
Can your eyes see the love I try to display?

How I long to feel you hand in mine,
To be understood by loving embrace.
For our bodies to intertwine,
For it’s ecstasy that I chase.

If only your eyes could see the truth,
Could I have more than friendship from you?
For you have made my wish come true,
Your beautiful eyes have brought me to you.


© Copyright 1999 Roger Leewright - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-29 09:08 PM


I absolutely love this...well written

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-29 09:46 PM


Love this, too!

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Denise

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-19 05:43 AM


Beautiful! Liked this much.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 1999-10-19 05:13 PM


Eyes...the mirriors of the soul. : ) Truly beautiful.
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie
  
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"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."


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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
7 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
8 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
9 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
10 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
11 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
12 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
13 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
14 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
15 posted 2000-07-05 01:17 PM


Very beautiful, Roger!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

passing shadows
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16 posted 2004-05-30 03:55 AM


awesome!
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