Open Poetry #2 |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Let me be the eye of the storm you run through come to me when all is thundering 'round you I'll give you tranquility and smooth your distress whisper so softly and banish duress I'll make all your nightmares drown in sweet dreams hide all your heartaches and silence the screams I'll be there for you when the winds blind your eyes show you the truth and bury the lies Let me take up your thoughts, suspend them in time until all the shadows have flown from your mind Come out of the rain, I offer you cover Glide into the arms of this harmonic lover I'll cast out the fears any tempest can bring with flute-like sounds I'll softly sing songs of peace that lull you to sleep in a cradle of feathers wide and deep When you awake the storms may be there but you'll always be safe in this spirit's care caroline 1999 all rights reserved ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Bravo Caroline! This is a true friend. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Very nice, very nice indeed. And so true about friendsip. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another great one caroline. You are exceptionally talented! I enjoy all your writings! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written. The rhyme and rythym work exceptionally well in this one. It flows very smoothly. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Caroline, Do I have to take a number or just wait in line? Beautiful poem. |
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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
Dear Caroline, It is as if you knew my mind WOW. So beautiful! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thanks everyone, your kindness is so appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Seymour...there are no lines...only circles. Step in, and welcome! ![]() ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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