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Emmy
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 194
KY

0 posted 1999-09-28 08:11 PM


tears fall like rain
in a shower of pain
nothing left to gain
in a pit of despair
what's one to do
when you know your love's true
but he doesn't love you
and nor does he care?
day after day
and endless charade
i pretend i'm okay
but my heart's turned to stone
and though i've tried
my pain to hide
i'm dying inside
i've never felt so ALONE...

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-28 10:00 PM


Very nice, Emmy. The title certainly fits!

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Denise

Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
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2 posted 1999-09-28 10:03 PM


very poigant

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



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