Open Poetry #2 |
Flickers of Fire {Circa 1969} |
Sunshine
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My book is back, and here is a sampling from much younger, more innocent times...and remember, the key word is "younger" Flickers of Fire The warm memories of loving you fade like a flicker of fire. Once again I hide them away, they have stayed too long and I tire. Where there once was softness, now screams out in pain, in a field of yellow and green, love lives alone, dies in vain. Where there once were treasures to fondle and care for, now are gone those elusive pleasures, no, I’ll have them nevermore. A figure to fit a swishing dream of a golden and silver weave; now you are bold lose my hold … and leave. My heart is cradled in the memories of your arms, once again I envelop myself in the mystery of your memory’s charms A flicker of fire grows, glimmers, cries, dies. Circa 1969 28 September, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Wow! Sunshine...I like this very much...what's the book? HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow, (dittoing RG on that one lol) this is beautiful, haven't we all done this, taken out a memory, cried and sighed, and then put it safely away, where it won't hurt us anymore.....very nice! |
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Sunshine
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Thank you RG - the "book" is what I've done a poem on about it's heartfelt loss - and now it's been returned, dating back to '68, showing everything I've learned... the "book" was my private archives of all my loves and trials gone by... and now that I've got PiP and now that I'm not shy... the "book" will become one of the family it's words will ring forth true and thank you so for commenting for the words were written for you! ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Sunshine
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Thanks ILI, you snuck in your response before I was done with mine, so I hope you check back and see this. Sunshine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Touching I enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
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Thanks, Sy! |
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