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Zaleha
Junior Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 10
singapore

0 posted 1999-09-28 06:25 AM


The first time I saw you
I know that you are meant for me
Your stare,your smile and your eyes
Is so special to me
It's like you are an angel
Can't you see?

The way you walk
Is like the way angels fly
If only I can see you again
Everything would be so fine
And I will touch the sky

You are so mysterious
And I like that
Suddenly I feel so curious
And I wonder
Why must you be so perfect?

Oh how I wish that I could meet you again
Even for a minute or a second
I would not mind
Even in my dreams
The world will sure be so right

I think that I have fallen in love
But with who?
I pray to the god above to let me try
Or even if I must die
Just to be with you is all I want
Yes that is true
My mysterious guy...

© Copyright 1999 Zaleha - All Rights Reserved
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-09-28 02:11 PM


Welcome to Passions! Nice work!

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




Zaleha
Junior Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 10
singapore
2 posted 1999-09-29 05:08 AM


Thanks a lot Julie
I really appreciate it

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