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Until there was you
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Until there was you |
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WonMan4evr New Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 1Republic MO |
Until there was you I walked this earth alone No hand to hold in mine My heart was all my own Until there was you True love was just a dream Dreams of wonderment and fairytail. Dreams of hope and love Until there was you My life had no direction a road of uncertainty but now we have a journey together you and me So I thank my lucky stars and God from the heavens above For my heart and soul could never Feel the impact of True love Until there was you... [This message has been edited by WonMan4evr (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful sentiment! I would rework the formatting a bit, a few lines get a bit long. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely!  ------------------ Denise |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Lovely. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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