Open Poetry #2 |
An introductory collection |
Quickbeam New Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 1Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa |
This is a small collection of poems, from a newcomer, as a short introduction. Not quite my normal style, any of them, but then what style is normal? So straight to it then... Number 1 Ever noticed the pleasure Of discovering someplace new Of visiting a foreign environment And making it part of yourself? This is the rapture known by pioneers This is the drug which drove them Forced them to go forward And brought man to the present. And now these prospects are gone. Travelling the world is taken for granted And mans greatest joys are jaded At least, to some minds We need look deeper for discovery now Rather than searching the world We must search within ourselves To find the paradises we seek. And there are many Innumerable Inconceivable Paradises To be brought to the world. From infinite others Number 2 Light and darkness Good and evil Saints and sinners Black and white. Have you ever seen black? An honest colour. Light’s complete absence. A hole into infinity White…. The colour of purity And of fools All yet none. Excluding but it’s antithesis, Harsh day Comforting night Constrained saints Free sinners These are mere barriers Extremes defining truth The ends of an infinite string. And the beginnings of a path to nowhere. Sun and moon Entirely different conceptions Exactly the same light One is One. Have you decided yet where the difference lies? Have you recognized yet what shapes our sight? Do you see why two people can see the same image But view opposing pictures? The scenery doesn’t change. But the viewpoint does And the conceptions do. As the observers do. The same applies for sense and insanity For pleasure and pain And for strength…. And weakness. Love and hatred..? And then, of course, number 3 Through the eyes of the demon The world was black and charred He understood and learnt to thrive And he was pleased. Through the eyes of the angel Life was green and bounteous But she knew death and decay And she was saddened. Through the eyes of the demon What was alive could easily be murdered Allowing him complete control of his wasteland And he was content Through the eyes of the angel Her paradise could only survive If left to it’s own devices And her only power was observation. Through the eyes of the demon His world’s evil was his own And his world’s pain his influence And he reveled in his power Through the eyes of the angel The violence she viewed was nature And her world’s rot it’s own doing And she wept in commiseration Through the eyes of the demon Fire was the best way to cleanse Destruction the only route to creation And he wrought rampantly. Through the eyes of the angel Fire was the only resort The last option to recreate But she could not overcome her empathy. Through the eyes of the demon he was victor. Through the eyes of the angel she was victim. Both may be right Yet both know themselves wrong. And so the battle rages on. ------------------ Smoke n mirrors.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
QuickBeam~ I guess two years is a long time to get your first response to such a lovely piece of work. I was dipping into the archives and found this talented offering~ Hope you're still out there to know someone enjoyed it~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
yes me too, I liked this, but im sorry that it took me 3 yrs to notice it in here! a buried treasure |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Why aren't you posting anymore? Come baaaaaaaaack! She said burn ... together. |
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