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Forty plus One
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Forty plus One |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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The blasted realization of a future undone Imprinted upon my eyes and mind A wasteland, where no bird nor tree Could survive Harsh stone thrusts upwards Grey and ochre Scum sealed stream My wishes and dreams My sacred resting place Now a bane, a curse The scourge which stripes my hide The pain and confusion Rear before me Thrashing and flogging Forty plus one Forty plus one Forty plus one Alicat |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Boy...don't I know this is the truth! Last verse...GREAT. It's that nagging voice in your head. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I enjoyed this Alicat. Very well done! ------------------ Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL shall I make this 36 ? sometimes I count backwards. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Just missing your work around here, Kitten. Looking for lost treasures.  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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