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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-09-27 12:08 PM


Words...
flyyyy by.
Accusations?
Tears?
Feelings?

Yes, quite so.

But what to do,
-at misinterpretation?

Rectification?
Retreat?

No, never retreat.

To retreat,
is to quit.
To quit,
is to admit defeat.
To admit defeat,
is a burden carried,
for life.

And I ask this:
Why carry,
an unnecessary burden,
when-

*forgiveness,*

is another option?

*Group HUG*

[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 09-27-1999).]

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Systematic Decay
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1 posted 1999-09-27 12:11 PM


I agree wholeheartedly, Chris.

In case you didn't get my email, Im sorry.

Can we have a peace now?

BTW, nice poem

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Denise
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2 posted 1999-09-27 12:11 PM


Beautiful! Well done, Christopher! I enjoyed this! Great message!

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Denise

Severn
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3 posted 1999-09-27 12:12 PM


Oh dear...
Lots of sympathetic hugs - for all of you!
(Well, especially for you Chris...)
Sad topic - but well written as usual.

DreamEvil
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4 posted 1999-09-27 12:34 PM


Peace is a lofty goal but nigh impossible since each person has views and opinions that will conflict with those of others.

Forgiveness is another matter all together and one I am just coming to understand myself. Forgivenees is not easy at all, yet such I am striving to accomplish.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Isis
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5 posted 1999-09-27 12:34 PM


(HUGS) for you Christopher, I'm getting to know the sweetie in you I feel..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



Michael
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6 posted 1999-09-27 12:58 PM


...and someone said forgiveness was divine.
Yeah, I do believe your right here. Well stated my friend.

Michael

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
7 posted 1999-09-27 09:02 PM


Thank you everyone for the support!

SD-Got it and granted.

Denise-a good message, but will it be heeded?

K-hugs gratefully accepted and returned!

Dream-then I dream lofty dreams. Agreed it is not an easy thing to grant, and sometimes it is not an easy thing to ask for.

Isis- (aww, shucks!)

Michael- thank you, and may I be granted devine forgiveness.


[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 09-27-1999).]

Balladeer
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8 posted 1999-09-27 09:07 PM


Some people don't retreat....they make strategic withdrawals.

Forgiveness is the one of the most difficult acts to accomplish, if it is done right. I hope to manage that some day.

Marilyn
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9 posted 1999-09-27 10:36 PM


Forgivness is something I strive for in my life but is a difficult task. Ball said it correctly, it is divine. Strategic withdrawals (depending on the circumstances) can create more bitterness and pain. It takes strength of character to face up to your mistakes and ask for forgivness.

These are just my thoughts. Thankyou for allowing me to state them.

RainbowGirl
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10 posted 1999-09-28 02:25 PM


Chris: Group hug????? ... Yippeeee!!! ...ooops..*g*

Well spoken my friend..

HUGS



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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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