I don't wanna talk about it now

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Open Poetry #2

I don't wanna talk about it now

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-09-26 07:31 PM

I don't wanna talk about it now
it seems so long ago
and you don't need to know
all those little things
like who your daddy was
you didn't miss a thing
and i don't wanna talk about it now

Why's my brother cryin on the telephone?
he's having those bad dreams
and feels so all alone
he said to ask you why, you've got to try
cause he don't wanna talk about it now

They say the truth can set you free
that's where I wanna be
so mom why won't you talk about it now?

Where'd my sister go in sixty three?
it seems like she was gone, forever
and so long, was she being bad?
cause now she's sad
and she don't wanna talk about it now

They say the truth can set you free
that's where I wanna be
so mom you've got to
talk about
it
now

[This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 09-27-1999).]

graham
Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 60
South Yorkshire, England

1 posted 1999-09-26 08:10 PM

You pull the reader in..so they want to know more...and get to the next bit. Powerful writing!.

As always....I'm in awe!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-27 08:16 AM

Very powerful poetry

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