Open Poetry #2 |
Setting Sail |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Setting Sail Let me come to you tonight in the belly of a great winged ship embraced by cirrus clouds as I fly over mountains and valleys to the ocean of your love Let me sail to heaven and back on the waves of passion that wash over me with each gentle caress of your hands while your lips on mine breath life into my drowning soul Let me explore all these uncharted waters memorizing each and every part of you in my eyes, hands and lips rocked softly to sleep in your body bathing in the afterglow and floating on the sea of your love ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Ruth, Wonderful imagery, sensuality, and passion! I loved it, Ruth. Bye for now. Tyson |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth, I absolutely loved this. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
John...I'm glad you liked it...I can not wait to set sail to you. Lost Dreamer...thank you ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Just wondering what direction you were flying East, West, South or North, or was it straight up into heaven. What ever there is one lucky guy at the other end. Enjoyed the poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore....thank you and I hope to be flying West in November...and I believe I am the lucky one ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh Hoot...how I love this one ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
hoot...you and tyson are running down my supply of Kleenex!! This is BEAUTIFUL! I can't wait until November either! heheheh...I'm hooked on this romance story ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Pepper....thank so much caroline...I'll remember to buy stock in kleenex Thank you for your comments...you may get tired of our poems to each other by November ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
nope....don't think so Hoot.....keep them coming please....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Pepper, I will do my best Denise, thank you ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ok Hoot, am I missing out on something here? You the lucky one? You have found romance after all? I thought so! "While your lips on mine breath life into my drowning soul" Wow! Great wording, and imagery my dear. I expect nothing less out of your work. It's always wonderful. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Hoot, this was sensational, passionate, and very sexy...having those dreams again? (hee!hee!) ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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graham Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60South Yorkshire, England |
Hehehe..you don't fool me for a second. You're in love!!! ------------------ I always wanted an edible canoe but you can't have your kayak and eat it too! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whtdove and Julie...where have you two been?? Smiles...check out some postings by a certain guy johnt300 graham....I don't deny it...yes, the bug has bitten ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - At this rate we're going to have to rename "Passions in Poetry" to "Passions in Partners" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL@ Nan's reply ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Ruth, I'll just say that everything I've said to you holds true still. You are indeed a person worth knowing well. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks dream...I appreciate that |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I've been here Hoot! I remembering asking you before if you were bitten and you said no. But I have seen you two going at it in your words. Congrats! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely, lovely, lovely...I can feel the passion in this. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whtdove...no denying it any more...and thanks Severn...I hope it's not long before you set sail also |
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