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Here is three quite short but sweet
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Here is three quite short but sweet |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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I sensed her then I sense her now Nothing's changed But, my mistakes Did you think me blind?? That I couldn't see the love in your eyes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ An old shoe A shoe brand new Sparkling to the eye Comfortable underneath So wonderful to be Yet,Time passes by Once new now old No longer useful Holes and tears Needing love and repairs But, instead comes along Another new shoe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Is it real?? Is it not?? Does he love her?? Does he not?? Is she living in a dream?? Is she playing make-believe?? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-03-99).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sweet! I like these!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Neat little diddy's! And welcome to the forum.[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 09-03-99).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You both!! This is a great place!! Justbleu |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx for sharing these short gems with me...you are right...i did enjoy them... like the "An Old Shoe" best...thought that the way you referred a relationship to the state of a shoe was unique and brilliant...loved these lines: Holes and tears Needing love and repairs But, instead comes along Another new show yes, often when a relationship falls apart,we may not try out means and ways to salvage the relationship but instead let it collapse and fall for someone else....very accurate here the last poem with the list of questions kind of remind me of a girl peeling off the petals of the rose, asking as she goes along:He loves me...He loves not.... feel the incessant doubt and questioning here thanx for sharing,Justbleu  |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
Great poems!!! [This message has been edited by Debbie Drugs (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
It's not quantity it's quality & you definitely have that! Love Deb  -x- |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You!!!!!!  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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