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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Your Sun (written in joint effort with johnt300) The muted waves lap alongside the wooden hulls In their rhythm, my heart beats in tune with yours I hear a gulls song off in the distance, hugging the land The haunting cries echo my lonely cries to you Another misty night gathers around my skin And I breathe it in, wanting it to fill this longing inside With each breath, I draw you, draw the sun, a little closer I long to be cloaked by your body, warmed by your light As the moon surrenders, losing her fight And I am risen in your sun Tyson...thanks for being my light and my inspiration ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-26-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
gorgeous Hoot...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hoot, you guys do just beautifully together. Another wonderful piece! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Pepper....thank you Whtdove...it comes so easily when we write together, effortlessly the words flow ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot & John: That's exactly as it should be..  HUGS both ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Wunnerful job you two... amazing what two people can do together! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...Rainbow....thank you.....Hugs Christopher....isn't it though?? Thanks ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ooh, beautiful work, hoot. This is definitely how it should be. I loved it.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - this is stunning, you two. Awesome joint effort! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you so much alwye and Severn |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Very beautiful Hoot, especially like "Another misty night gathers around my skin And I breathe it in, wanting it to fill this longing inside With each breath, I draw you, draw the sun, a little closer I long to be cloaked by your body, warmed by your light" WOnderful imagery! ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hoot & John, this is beautiful, absolutley! well done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Ruth, I finally have a chance to reply to our poem here. This is my favorite of ours to date. And it came so quickly and easily. Thanks for always complimenting my lines perfectly, every time. Take care until this morning when we talk. Pepper, WhtDove, Rainbowgirl, Christopher, Alwye, Severn, Beki, Dark Angel, Thank you all for you replies. Very much appreciated by us both. Thanks again. Tyson |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You two are the perfect compliment for eachother. Blesssings. ------------------ Michael Anderson Loneliness isn't in being alone; Loneliness is alone in being. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beki and dark angel...thank you both for your wonderful comments on this one Tyson...it just so hapens to be my favorite of ours too. I love writing with you Michael...what a nice thing to say, thank you |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Michael, That definitely is a great reply. Thank you. Tyson |
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