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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-03 10:21 PM


The Rose

Leaves alone

Fear unknown

Searching for the rose

Lost

Blackness draws near

Crashing through leaves

Warmth lies in shadows

Strange among these trees

Unfamiliar to the eye

A rose

Impossible to see

Secluded in an image

Beneath obscurity

Through the gloom

Fading from view

Slipping

Forever passed

Vanished

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-03-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-04 12:55 PM


Very lovely, Justbleu. I really enjoyed this one too!

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Denise

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-22 12:13 PM


Cool!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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3 posted 1999-09-22 10:37 AM


I liked this one

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
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4 posted 1999-09-22 10:40 AM


Very nice Bleu!


DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 1999-09-22 12:55 PM


Thank You Both!!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



WhtDove
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6 posted 1999-09-22 12:58 PM


Not what I expected for a rose. But very nice nontheless!
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