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@>-^----- through the eyes of a child
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loverbaby Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 15Sioux City Iowa |
~~Please tell me what you think~~ He touches her but she doesn't scream she doesn't say a word she just recalls the threats that she heard but to this girl it seems only normal cause it happens more then once in a while but thats how it's seen through the eyes of a child ~* he see's his mama being hit by his daddy but to him it's only right cause he see's it happen close to every night he is scared of his daddy and thats putting it mild but thats how it is seen through the eyes of a child. ~* she wanders the dirty streets afraid and alone just wondering if she has a place to call her home see her mother lost her job again just the other day they don't have any money yet there are bills to pay her mommy is a saint although the drugs turn her wild but thats how it is seen throught the eyes of a child ------------------ Niki Frady |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
This is an intense poem.. you touched many emotions here. Nicely done. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow...there are sooo many children out there that have probably felt these...sooo sad!! Yes, I agree with Lucie...quite intense!! Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a good commentary on today's atrocities, LB. Good job. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
loverbaby..I agree with both Lucie and Justblue; intense is the emotion that came to mind when reading this piece....written well..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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