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Daddy's Girl |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean 
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The sunshine breaks and spills its light Across the quiet darkened day A tiny star gives one last spark Before letting morning have its way The quietness of sleeping sounds Is broken as nature begins to stir And sleepiness calls you back to bed For a few more moments next to her You snuggle in and tuck her close Beneath the comfort of your arm That has a way of letting her know She's protected from any harm The night creatures don't stand a chance No more bad thoughts will she dream She knows she's safe where she lays Her and her Daddy are a team |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Just beautiful. Very poigniant (sp?). Thank you for sharing this one. Touching. Tyson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Deb, Good subject, nice rhyme and well stated. Enjoyed the read. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
How sweet, and beautifully written. Treasure those times they pass so quickly.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful and very touching....thanks for sharing ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very touching Deb...left me all warm and fuzzy....great work ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
This one made me feel so warm inside. You did a GREAT job relaying the feeling. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sweet! Reminds me of my granddaughter, Nicole and her Pop-Pop! ------------------ Denise |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That is sweet...I can relate to this...I will always be my daddy's girl!! I liked this a lot!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Precious, Deb. |
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