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I love you |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I love you Your touch sets my blood on fire I love you Your eyes shine as bright as the stars I love you The sent of your hair intoxicates me I love you You are the only thing I can think about I love you You are the reason I wake up in the morning I love you My heart sings out for you I love you I am lost without you I love you I am empty away from you I love you I love you I love you |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This has a sort of intensity about it..definitely does a great job on describing the fever of love. Exellent work, my friend!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Ruby dagger Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76Wyoming, MN, U.S.A |
Great one! it shows how love is a one track mind! :-) ------------------ Luv ya Kelly I'm no different than the average girl, my dreams wrap around the world. -Rebecca Lynn Howard |
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