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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-09-03 09:43 PM


How she lives
why she and not he?
because she
is kind, ever gentle
casts her colours
and gives with light

We see that thoughts
and emotions
are streaked in colour
blue for coldness
yellow for open
green for freshness
red for stop
no man's land
amber for preparation
the start of the rainbow
for if your mind is closed
you will never see
the beauty
that is me
so open wide those eyes of yours
and look deep into the sky
as the softness
of the rain
touches your skin
so I will show
my heart to you
watch me as I arc and play
lovingly I need not stray
see me now, watch me go
hold me
for true colour
will play upon your mind
and once let go
it will only be you
that you can find
for I can only stay
where your dreams
can live
night and day
my light will cast upon the moon
the dream you'll live
so very soon

The colours of the rainbow
I live within your smile


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-03-99).]

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Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-09-03 10:03 PM


I knew a girl...her teeth were green
With just a faded tinge of white.
Her lips a garish ruby red
Illuminating night.

A yellow tongue inside her mouth
From all the liver bile.
She was a gal that truly had
A rainbow for a smile!

I'm sorry, Rainbow. Your poem is really beautiful. It really is. I just get caught up in these urges sometimes.......


RainbowGirl
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2 posted 1999-09-03 10:17 PM


I'm laughing too much to do a thing.....you swine....you ruined my poem but made a rainbow cry...or is that smile...same thing, colours are flashing....

Now come on females...didn't he just ruin the heart....LOL...God, I wish he was near because I'd make him suffer, every single tiny piece that I could get hold of...ooops

ROFLMAO

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



The Keeper Of Keys
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3 posted 1999-09-03 10:21 PM


I liked this poem, I really did.

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-09-03 10:38 PM


Keys: You just want revenge, same as me...LOL

Seriously, Thank you...these words are my thoughts before some blighter came along and sacrificed them...but, I'll have the last laugh cause hot coals he'll not like and I fancy, he'll disappear quickly or maybe need something to blow the coals out.....he's still a lovable swine though...:-)))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-09-03 11:23 PM


Hot coals, you say?





[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 09-03-99).]
Justbleu
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6 posted 1999-09-03 11:26 PM


I loved it!!!!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

Denise
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7 posted 1999-09-03 11:56 PM


Rainbow Girl: Beautiful!!
Balladeer: Hillarious!!

(one for each of you!)

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Denise

WhtDove
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8 posted 1999-09-04 12:07 PM


Most stunningly beautiful poem!
Balladeer control your urges! LOL (it really was quite funny!)

RainbowGirl
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9 posted 1999-09-04 05:15 AM


Thanks for the smiles and the comments...:-))) Balladeer must surely be tired from all the running by now...*g*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



passing shadows
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10 posted 1999-09-04 05:41 AM


RG: you know this touches me in a different way than it may anyone else...thank you as always. You are beautiful...as always.

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*shadowy-one*

suthern
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11 posted 1999-09-04 06:40 AM


ROFLMAO!!!! Yanno, this is a bit like setting a beautiful dining table where the centerpiece is lovely and the silverware shines and the crystal sparkles and the air is full with the smells of a delightful dinner... and the neighbor kid (a very OLD kid, Balladeer! LOL) runs in and empties his pockets onto the end of the table... including the dead frog and crushed bird's egg! LOL.

Great job... both of you! LOL

RainbowGirl
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12 posted 1999-09-05 03:04 AM


Shadows

You're biased.. HUGS

Suthern

You described that so perfectly...LOL

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



Michael
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13 posted 1999-09-05 03:32 AM


Beautiful poem Rainbow Girl, read exquisitely.


Michael

Nan
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14 posted 1999-09-05 08:51 PM



Very nice, RG

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