Lifted Up On Angel's Wings. ( A challenge from WhtDove)

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Lifted Up On Angel's Wings. ( A challenge from WhtDove)

Starith
Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA

0 posted 1999-09-24 07:09 PM

I thought of you the other day
It was kind of funny in away.
For you see
I do not think of thee.

It was in a dream, see?
And your heart was soaring free.
Your soul was no longer bound
And your feet never touched the ground.

I wished that I could be
Like that, know how it felt to fly free.
And so I begged of you,
"Oh please tell me, won't you?"

When suddenly I heard a voice,
Maybe it was by choice,
Beautiful as can be the song that it did sing
The words I heard they lifted me up on angel's wings.

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 1999-09-24 07:15 PM

A lovely poem Starith

loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

2 posted 1999-09-24 07:25 PM

Sweet dreams ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Starith
Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA

3 posted 1999-09-25 12:01 PM

Thank you DA..I was worried about this one...not my usual reason for writing...so I worried it might not be that good.

But if a poet of your talents says it's lovely then I guess it must be. Thank you again.

Nocht: I hope that all my dreams will be this sweet. Lord knows I've had more than my share of nightmares. Thank you.

Star

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

[This message has been edited by Starith (edited 09-25-1999).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-09-25 01:05 PM

I hope your dreams turn sweeter! As like in this poem! I will pray for your nightmares! I know they are no fun.

Starith
Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA

5 posted 1999-09-25 07:26 PM

Thank you Dove...I feel your prays.

My dreams are getting better as time goes on.

Star

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