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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
You love me I want to abort the fetus of your affection And keep it in a jar Fresh formaldehyde to kill the infection Kill your bliss I want to take your affection, wrap it in wire End its evolution Before it grows withered and old and tired Before it dies Before it rots as it sees its own stupidity Kill it Before it realizes this montstrous piece of humanity Is the fuel of its fire Kill it Before you hate me ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Despite the tone of this poem, it is extreamly well written. The symbolism is excellent and it flows very well. I can't say as I agree with your sentiments, but I've been there a time or two before and understand where you are coming from. ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
wooooo i loved it very much so actually ------------------ "If to rectify your demeanor, You must imitate another, Your philosiphy on morality Is a burden on your mentality, Your actions based on popularity, Will never fulfill you internally, Cuz the world was not blessed with equality, But rather with fake geniality. --823-- |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Your verse describes the feelings and situation well. Lovely verse, by the way. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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