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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-09-24 12:14 PM


Yesterday was way too sad
so today I want us all to smile
Toerag can even be really bad (ooops)
Come on, let's be versatile

The challenge I'm tossing oops I meant giving
is to write a poem in freeverse or rhyme
about a poet from here who can be forgiving*g*
and I'm gonna start with DeVine...

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DeVine in poetry and kind to one and all
smashing to talk to and extremely witty
I have no idea if she's short or tall
or even if she's fat, thin or pretty

DeVine has something called style
and she really makes me laugh
I have to peek in once in a while
To read all the latest
from this 'DeVine' member of staff

Now I know Toerag will probably do 'Deer'
raise my eyes to the ceiling
as I think to myself "oh dear"
but I'm sure he'll do his usual
and have us all squealing
with tales of poor 'Deer's' sheepish rear

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-24-1999).]

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suthern
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1 posted 1999-09-24 12:30 PM


I'd rather kick back, relax, admire
Perhaps pour fuel on some fire
Than sit and struggle with some verse
Mumble, grumble, bitch and curse.
Many here are quite inspiring
But I don't care much for perspiring
To demonstrate my admiration
I have subjects, lack dedication!

RainbowGirl
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2 posted 1999-09-24 12:34 PM


Suthern: You think maybe 'Deers' rear may need some help?..*g*

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-09-24 01:24 PM


I am so flattered that you chose to write about me!! Thank you so much. Of course it's a wonderful poem - even if the subject matter (me) is a little weird!

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-09-24 04:27 PM


Flattered????...and so you should be..*g*..LOL

HUSG PDV

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-09-25 04:31 AM


Now this may surprise some...ok, prolly allof you , but I am choosing Dream Evil...and Ill tell you why in a poem
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