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I was lifted up on Angel's wings - challenge from WhtDove
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I was lifted up on Angel's wings - challenge from WhtDove |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Life is full of magic the highs and lows tho' sometimes tragic depends on what you know Yesterday started well Till I read of Echo Rhayne on her life I started to dwell thinking of joy and pain Sunset arrived and departed my thoughts dipped with the sun I couldn't be light-hearted losing track of any fun The pain I felt sought release my fingers typed my emotions seeking solace needing peace causing panic and commotion To bed I went to shift my mind to dream of better places let loose and unrefined images of charm and grace In peace my heart started to sing as I travelled through time and space I was lifted up on Angel's wings made of gossamer and lace... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is really beautiful RainbowGirl, well done  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very, very nice Rainbow! You describe well how I think a lot of us felt yesterday! (((hugs))) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just like your heart, this is simply beautiful!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This deserves to be on top again! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
you said it so well Rainbow....beautifully done....hugs ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you all...it did bring some painful memories back but writing gets it out of my system, so to speak..:-) HUGS all ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Rainbow you have done it again. Simply beautiful. Star ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You thy mistress hath undoubtedly won the challenge, well done!! ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you Starith and Isis..:-) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
RainbowGirl, This was simply beautiful and touching. I found the last stanza was breathtalking, in itself. Michael |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you Michael.. Guess there's no denying when the heart writes the words and the fingers are simply instruments...HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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