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We Hide Within Our Words
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We Hide Within Our Words |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sometimes we hide within our words a pain that screams for release hoping that someone will see and offer our soul some peace Simply put a rhyme or verse can a complicated thought impart finding the key to the puzzle can heal a wounded heart. Read well my poems, brother but heed well my words, my friend do not trust the beginning until you’ve read the end. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I loved this deVine.. your words speak volumes.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Poet, this is terrific love it, do not trust the beginning until you've read the end, loved that part especially. Well Done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
LOL... taking this at face value, too true! Often I have thought a poem was leading somewhere, only to find it travelling elsewhere! Digging a little deeper, perhaps an analogy of life. You never know about life until it is over... it can always surprise you! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
So true... Hugs ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Another pearl of wisdom from you Lady deVine that, of course, makes for an awesome read. This likes me much, your philosophical bent that is. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
So true PDV! Powerful message here! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done and oh so true!!! ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, PDV! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PVD, I liked the bend in the end. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
My feelings exactly. Well versed! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You hit the nail right on the head with that one! Well done!: ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
You've done it again! Bravo my friend! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How interesting that we both wrote about the reality of our words today....ya think??? |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, so very true, Miss deVine...wonderful work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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