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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Sometimes I wonder how people cant try to hurt you so badly and make your heart cry what pleasure is in it what drives them to be so empty and hateful towards people in need the pain and aloneness these people must feel how could someone do this how could it be real theres so much to offer theres so much to give in this life we're granted to cherish and live everyone feels and everyone cries everyone lives and everyone dies life doesnt have to be empty and cold the days and nights warmer with someone to hold our life's what we make it so give it your all dont ever give up and you'll never fall [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-23-1999).] |
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StuffN New Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 7USA |
:* .flesruoy sa nam citnamor ,gnimrahc a teem t'nac I dab oot dnA .ecivda ruoy ekat t'nac elpoep emos dab ooT .krow fo eceip lufituaeb a saw sihT |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
*; em teem ot nottub "SsYkReDnUhT liame" eht no kcilC  stnemmoc ecin ruoy rof uoy knaht[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-24-1999).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I liked your poem, but will I have to hold my computer monitor up to a mirror to read your replies? Ok..hold on... rorrim taht dna nur em tel |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
won thgir etirw I nac meop siht dekil yllaer I Ah...this is better...good work and what's with the mirror image? ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you for your kind replies, hoot_owl_rn and Poet deVine I appreciate your input greatly. Sorry about the backwards writing... Sort of a little thing my friend StuffN and I have We are both new to this site, and love it lots.[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-24-1999).] |
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