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Open Poetry #2

Buried (please comment!)

Lorelei
Junior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 23
Philadelphia, PA

0 posted 1999-09-23 11:05 PM

I have come to terms with my
existence,
taking everything that's pushed my
way,
Seeing everything stay the same,
watching my life grow weaker each
day.

But I know which path i have
chosen,
and I know where it will lead me.
If I choose not to stay, to keep
everything, I know I will never be free.

I think I will be better off
leaving,
though I know the pain will be
great.
What can I do? I know now that
I have chosen my own fate.

Chosen the path that so few walk,
I guess I thought what else is
there?
Well, there's nothing for me now.
Any more, i don't think i care.

This is my life, and I live in
this
world that is dragging me down.
And they scream out, "how can you
do this?"
as they bury me to where i can't
be found.

But I will remain quiet, and
I will keep this buried deep inside,
Even though I know you are free,
and I myself have died.

[This message has been edited by Lorelei (edited 09-23-1999).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-09-23 11:10 PM

Lorelei,
Can't agree with the semtiments but I did enjoy the poem.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-23 11:25 PM

Sounds like your really hurt! I hope things will get better for you!

Lorelei
Junior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 23
Philadelphia, PA

3 posted 1999-09-24 08:26 AM

Things are better now... well I
think anyway! LOL!! But anyway,
thank you for replying...

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