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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396


0 posted 1999-09-17 09:22 PM


I would love a kiss from those ruby red lips. Just a kiss.
Something you'll never miss.
Full and pouting, they leave me doubting
my sanity.

My love of you did once hide. It buried itself deep inside
my mind where I did find
that you love me too.

Your angelic elfin face I long to touch. Just a single touch.
That I think is not asking much
though such would truely
set me free.

I would hold you to my chest, one hand upon our breast.
I can feel your beating heart
as it does start racing in time to my rhyme.
All my words I write for you,
the ~one voice~ to which
I will ever be true.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-09-17 09:26 PM


I think you have caught the fever...the love fever that is...nicely done!
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 1999-09-19 04:36 AM


This is beautiful Soul-Brother

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 1999-09-23 05:59 PM


Beautiful!!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-09-23 06:08 PM


yes....so beautiful

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
5 posted 1999-09-23 06:13 PM


sigh, ah, what love does to a person...it is beautiful to see, am happy for you love your writings...
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-09-23 06:23 PM


Beautifully written my friend::

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
7 posted 1999-09-23 06:24 PM


Nice work, DreamEvil
Like the change of pace in form.
(been songwritting?)

Michael

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
8 posted 1999-09-23 06:38 PM


Dreamevil, this is beautiful!!!

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What you hid from your parents as kids, you will hide from your kids as parents. ~Cletus T Judd~



DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

9 posted 1999-09-24 04:46 AM


Indeed beautiful she is.

Michael, no but I'm willing to learn.

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