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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-23 05:35 PM

My dead heart begins to beat with new life.
This glacial coldness of soul your touch melts.
Your one voice parts my sadness like a knife.
Silken sound wraps me in the softest felts.

My rage transforms into passion for you.
Your words weave wonders across jaded eyes.
Cupid's arrow has pierced my heart clean through.
With true love my new life you did baptize.

My nerves tingle and burn with your pleasure.
My living heart beats in time to your song.
Of true love you are the surest measure.
You helped me to see where my life went wrong.

My pulse races when we talk on the phone.
For you no longer is my heart a stone.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

1 posted 1999-09-23 05:37 PM

I love this.. I am so glad you have found someone to make you feel this way!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-09-23 05:46 PM

You're a very lucky man, DreamEvil.
You have many, many gifts.

Michael

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-09-23 05:52 PM

Wow.....that could basically describe the process of me falling in love...great poem

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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4 posted 1999-09-23 06:53 PM

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-09-23 09:40 PM

I agree with Michael. You are truly gifted, my friend. I'm so glad you've found some happiness. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 1999-09-23 11:01 PM

DreamEvil,
Your poetry is powerful happy or sad.
Excellent.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

7 posted 1999-09-24 12:52 PM

A "voice" can do wonders can it not friend?

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

8 posted 1999-09-24 04:43 AM

I am indeed lucky, I see that now. Whether it becomes a trend remains to be seen. Thank you all much.

True Christopher, but only one voice in particular.

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