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Open Poetry #2

One of my new ones

Newguy
Junior Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 36
Moultrie, GA, USA

0 posted 1999-09-23 09:41 AM

Many Things

So many things I want to say;
Each time I am thrown to yet another day.
I want to declare that my love for you,
Is holy, pure, ever so true,
These things, however, you already knew
When you ran, you laughed, you said we were through.
So now I sit, write my humble thoughts,
They are all I have left, though I feel they're for naught.
We all want a love, we all want a chance,
We all want friends, we all want romance.
Now most all of these things died with you
As I always expected, as I always knew.
So thus I write, I author, I pen,
These words, hopeing I'll be granted those prizes again.

This is a basic poem I wrote one day under sever emotinal distress. So please don't kill it too bad

-Keith

kk
Junior Member

since 1999-09-16

Posts 14

1 posted 1999-09-23 09:59 AM

It great!! I can definitely relate to this one........I think I'll steal it from ya! j/k!!!

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True Love leaves heartprints on the Soul

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

2 posted 1999-09-23 10:26 AM

yes I can feel the distress, hope it is better today, but the poem is well written, and about a subject that I can relate to also....good job

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