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Open Poetry #2

No End

Steelbird
New Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 2

0 posted 1999-09-23 02:32 AM

You once were mine , our love was true
like a rose kissed by the dew.

Just what went wrong, I cannot say
But another one took you away.

Although it hurts, I wonder why
A love so sweet just had to die.

I must move on though filled with grief
to sit and cry brings no relief.

It hurts so bad to feel this way
I'll hide my tears and walk away.

And tell myself, You've got to try
but I can't tell my love Goodbye.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 1999-09-23 02:33 AM

Poignant and moving in its simplicity.
Bravo and welcome!

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

2 posted 1999-09-23 02:36 AM

Well written, I especially liked "like
a rose kissed by the dew;"

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

Steelbird
New Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 2

3 posted 1999-09-23 03:05 AM

Thanks Julie. I appreciate your encouragement.I wrote this for an internet friend who lost her son in a car accident recently.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-23 03:26 AM

Sad , but well written

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