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Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

0 posted 1999-09-20 11:40 PM

CAPTURED

Engagement of a grin,

Embraced inducement,

Bewitching enticement.

Lips dripping words

Petitioning to seduce.

Touch as warm as cobalt blue,

Appetites plotting pursuit,

Starvation its witness,

Submission compulsively danced.

Darkened eyes lead to confess,

Caresses shielding nights hostile rages.

Ballads of enchanted sensations,

Asylum of shadowed intensity;

Phantom's erotic capture.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-09-22 10:24 AM

A poem that says a lot in a few lines! Ballads of enchanted sensations is a great line! And I like your Shakespeare quote. I found this on page 2 of the Forum so I thought it deserved to be brought back to the top!

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

2 posted 1999-09-22 10:54 AM

I agree with deVine.. this definately deserves a second look! Nice..

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

3 posted 1999-09-22 12:02 PM

Thank you both for your kind comments.
It did give me a giggle tho', Shakesperian
quote...that came right from my own head
and my handy thesaurus.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-09-22 12:38 PM

Lips dripping words, quite a unique line there! Very good!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-09-22 01:04 PM

Julie,
Well done enjoyed the read.

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

6 posted 1999-09-22 01:21 PM

Thank you Seymour and WhtDve, I was begining to think if it didn't rhyme it wasn't poetry.
Do you guys have that trouble?

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

7 posted 1999-09-22 01:32 PM

PDV thanks for bringing this back, I know I read it yesterday, but didn't get to reply, sometimes work calls me away from my play lol, I liked it, it is one that the reader can see action, witout graphic descriptions, very nice!

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

8 posted 1999-09-22 02:06 PM

Thank you lloveit. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 1999-09-22 05:39 PM

I very much liked this line

"Petitioning to seduce"

given my line of work. Well done, Julie!

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

10 posted 1999-09-23 01:57 AM

Gotcha Sunshine. Anything I can do
for a friend.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

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