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startin_fresh
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0 posted 1999-09-22 07:07 PM

Angel

Love's fire burning bright
Innocent baby browns
Angel slays the man


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1 posted 1999-09-22 09:16 PM

I wasn't going to respond here, but rethought. What I would like to see sf, is an expansion of this. Perhaps some elucidation on what the feelings are behind this... You use a nice combination of words, but I admit (in the true feeling of constructive criticism,) that they tell a larger story and require more words!

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