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Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX

0 posted 1999-09-22 02:46 PM


There's a new place in town
in our little community,
it places a crown
and instills unity.
A world of your own,
accepting new creations,
ideas written in stone;
all for Ron's recreation.
Come tell us what you think,
don't say...wait and see;
for it's only you that makes us link.
We the people wished for this to be;
where your thoughts and advice,
plan a world for you and me;
Don't let me say this twice!
It's a country with "real" democracy;
Come join me in a land of the free,
The "SUGGESTION BOX" is where I'll be.


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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare



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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-22 06:58 PM


Nice way to make an announcement.....thanks for giving us the Suggestion (sorry for the pun)

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
2 posted 1999-09-23 01:54 AM


Thanks hoot, thought this one was going
to die a quiet death. Thanks for the
recognition.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-09-23 08:21 AM


Julie, we won't let this die a quiet death. Thanks!!!
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-09-23 08:31 AM


Julie,
Just thought I'd help out and keep it on top.
Good poem, good idea.

Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
5 posted 1999-09-23 06:07 PM


Thank you Seymour and WhtDve for your help.
The longer this stays on top hopefully
the word will get out. Maybe I should
of called it..."I wanna be on top" original
title wouldn't you say....(hee!hee!)

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare



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