Open Poetry #2 |
Echo Rhayne...Hmm...hehe =) |
Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Let me tell you a story about a girl named Echo Rhayne. They put her in a mental home and labeled her insane! She knew she couldn't fight it, she knew it must be done. They threw her in a padded cell where she could see no sun. They didn't hear her crying, they couldn't see her tears. They kept her locked up in that cell for two long lonely years. She begged for them to let her out, but they ignored her plea. Could they see what they were doing, or were they too blind to see? Two years later down the line, they finally set her free. You see I know this all too well for Echo Rhayne is me!! |
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Sean Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 17Holtville, CA. USA |
And I am glad you are Echo Rhayne, cause I love you sis! When did you write this poem? *huggles* I like how it flows! |
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EDS New Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 5San Diego, CA. USA |
I'm glad you're out! That is definitely a great thing because we all get to read your beautiful poetry! Love ya Echo |
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Jay_Jay Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 38San Diego, CA. USA |
I like it! Good job! *hugs* I love you too Echo! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hugs from me, echo, great poem, sad story, with a happy ending |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Ive been put away, but not for 2 years and the cell wasnt padded......2 years being locked away can drive anyone insane, even if they were perfectly sane when they went in. Happy you finally made it out.n |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written Echo...I'm glad you're out and expressing all these feelings in poetry for everyone to appreciate ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Systematic Decay...Yes, you are right, anyone locked away for 2 years can go insane even if they weren't insane when they went in there! I know that from experience! Hoot...Thank you! =) I dont know if anyone appreciates it though! |
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Sean Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 17Holtville, CA. USA |
I just wanted to bring you back up to the top Echo. *hugs* |
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