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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Satiate Addicted am I found Though she's not around Timidly watching the clock Slicing seconds to tick and tock Time dragging its schoolboy feet Until the moment we can meet A longing, a need keeps me awake And my heart does palpitate Waiting for my Satiate Naked fear waits within Even after I land at ten Will she want me? Yes or no Hoping that my tears won't flow For not often do I cry Save when soft words bring them nigh Even now I tremble and quake As my thoughts illuminate The visage of my Satiate And I know such wonderous love Is a gift from God above With comfort both sublime, surreal I to her secrets reveal And from such our love grows stronger Though the days do seem much longer So very hard, yet still I wait To stand before my boarding gate And fly the sky to Satiate Found in love, kit and kaboodle Longing for my sNikkidoodle Chestnut tresses, storm-green eyes Across the sky-bowl my love lies Both our stomachs will syncro-flip When my plane pulls in the slip Then will end my lifelong wait Long I've searched for my soul-mate Finding such in Satiate Alicat, the lovestruck kilted kitty [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 09-21-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...very romantic and it seems that love bug has bitten yet another of Passions couples  ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
sorry....didn't see your request to hold the posting.....*hopes satiate comes quickly to see this beautiful work* very beautiful, am thinking of making reservations to go see a cherished friend, so I know just what you speak of, very beautifully done! [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-21-1999).] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I want to reply...but you have stolen my words and left me speechless. Thank you so very much for this, sug. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - Never let it be said that I don't take direction well - even though I don't - I liked it this morning, and I like it now... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awwww... in't that sweet??? J/K you, this is marvelous! I only dream of the day I step on my plane! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Thank you everyone for the heartfelt replies. Chris...yeah, man, that anticipation is gonna be strong. Nan...it's ok...I was the kinda kid who would start on model planes, get stuck, then read the instructions. Iloveit and hoot_owl...thank you both for such tender words. Satiate...you know my love transcends the physcical world...find me there. Alicat |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
uhhhhh 35 ? |
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