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When You Think |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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When you are feeling lonely and you think you can’t go on. Turn and see my loving smile in the coming of the dawn. When you think that you can’t go on and take another step. Look upon the dew kissed roses and know for you I’ve wept. When you are feeling all alone without a single friend. Feel my kisses that I send to you upon the gentle wind. When you think you can’t rise up to face another day alone. Look upon the wild flowers that from wayward seeds have grown. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Indeed, I will.  ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
a friendship as portrayed here is surely a treasure....I love this Lucie......... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lucie, wow, this is absolutley beautiful, mind if I print it out and share it with friends? I'd like to keep it in my folder. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Actually I'd like to hang it up ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sweet elegance, Lucie You have a beautiful style. Michael |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Dark Angel I would be honored. Thank you all for your replies. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely, Lucie!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lucie, With this poem I dub you a poet. Excellent. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written Lucie....thanks for posting ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Oh geesh Seymour was that all it took? Dang.. guess all that other stuff I been writing all this time was nothing? |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Well done Lucie! Very lovely poem! It grabs you by your heart strings.Brought a tear to my eye. DBeth ------------------ When we give of ourselves whole heartedly,it comes back around ten fold. |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
Enjoyable sentiment. Thanks for sharing this well written piece. -pan |
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