Open Poetry #2 |
Copper Care |
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and the saga continues - Here's one from my very wonderful daughter, Stacie... Copper Care by Stacia A. Ness Copper Love ~ Copper Care Sitting on his dresser there. He loved us so with all his might, Came home late but tucked us in tight. Catch a smile with such a glow ~ So small with more love than you'll ever know. A walk in the afternoon Or watch the flowering sunset 'til moon, A movie or a late night show ~ Does he see we love him so? He can not change but only regret All the wasted years we've spent. If we could go back to the day he could spare His Copper Love and his Copper Care. .......................We love you, Dad [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-20-1999).] |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Stacie or Stacia? I really liked this poem. I am sorry whatever occurred, but it seems like you had a wonderful father. I truly wish you the best! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Artur - Her given name is Stacia - I call her Stacie - and her father was a good one for about 6 years - then he had more pressing issues in his life - though he never really was a very good husband....Ah well, c'est la vie, I guess.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, A fool, is a fool, is a fool, like a rose is a rose. *L* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Okay Nan....you must have the most poetic family on the face of the earth ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
It's all wonderful it seems - but the flair your family possesses for poetry is just amazing. Letting you know I saw this! |
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