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skysight
Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 22


0 posted 1999-09-20 05:19 PM


Kiss me goodbye, my darling,
Tell me you love me and smile.
I'll close my eyes so you won't see me cry...
Walk away.
I'll forget the lies you told me,
Ignore the times you left.
Just hold me in your arms,
Whisper your tender words.
I'll close my eyes so you won't see me cry...
I love you, my sweet.
Walk away.
Kiss me goodbye, my darling.
Walk away.

© Copyright 1999 skysight - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-20 05:34 PM


Very sad , but well written

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-09-22 10:26 AM


Sounds like the making of a song here! Welcome to the family!

DarkKnight
Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 12

3 posted 1999-09-23 05:43 PM


Oft have I but felt as this;
and whence forth my pain came springing,
I wept in sorrow's faithless bliss
and lived on to continue singing.


Keep writing, Skysight. Life is painful but filled with much joy. 'Tis only a matter of allowing it to find you.

Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
4 posted 1999-09-24 04:24 PM


I loved this...needs another go 'round.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




skysight
Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 22

5 posted 1999-09-25 01:31 AM


Thank you all - all, what, five of you? - thanks for the comments...most of the stuff I've ever posted is ignored, as I'm sure many others have noticed about their own work. So I appreciate what I get, no matter how trivial or insightful it may be.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-04-18 03:01 PM


sad but good
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