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Walk Away |
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skysight Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 22 |
Kiss me goodbye, my darling, Tell me you love me and smile. I'll close my eyes so you won't see me cry... Walk away. I'll forget the lies you told me, Ignore the times you left. Just hold me in your arms, Whisper your tender words. I'll close my eyes so you won't see me cry... I love you, my sweet. Walk away. Kiss me goodbye, my darling. Walk away. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very sad  , but well written------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds like the making of a song here! Welcome to the family!  |
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DarkKnight Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 12 |
Oft have I but felt as this; and whence forth my pain came springing, I wept in sorrow's faithless bliss and lived on to continue singing. Keep writing, Skysight. Life is painful but filled with much joy. 'Tis only a matter of allowing it to find you. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I loved this...needs another go 'round. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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skysight Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 22 |
Thank you all - all, what, five of you? - thanks for the comments...most of the stuff I've ever posted is ignored, as I'm sure many others have noticed about their own work. So I appreciate what I get, no matter how trivial or insightful it may be.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad but good |
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